Task 1a

So I started of writing a personal profile, but the more I looked at my current performance Cv, the more I disliked it. So, I took a little break from the writing to edit my Cv. It's very simular in structure, but I hated the black boxes, felt it was too masculine. Wanted it to be simple and clear. Would really appreciate comments on weather is clear, of if I need to make certain information more difined?! 
Have included it below, hope you can see it, if not I'll add it via a flickr album!